Alicia
This part is excellent! Such a lot of fun!
Their conversation is exactly how I’d imagined it would be. Their reactions to each other are great. They are so much alike and you did a wonderful job showing it.
I love how Lois’s idea to start again backfired until eventually it took thoughts of Clark for both of them to realize what was happening. It shows their trust in Clark and what he thinks. Both Clark’s would definitely have thought that they were acting very childishly.
I’m enjoying this immensely and look forward to the next part.
Tricia
