I was bothered by the idea that Lois would commit suicide. That was hard for me to buy. I'm not certain that is really in her character, as she is such a fighter.
I agree with CC. Lois, IMO, is not the kind of woman to ever comtemplate taking her own life let alone do it.
That was the only think that jarred on me in your wonderful story, Sarah. Beautifully written and full of thought provoking issues.
I'm so happy you were able to finish it.
