Sara,
I just finished all three parts. I didn't want to start until I knew you were finished!
I know it's been said, but I really appreciated the 1st person pov. Something different and very intimate, which was just perfect for this piece.
I don't think I ever get tired of TOGOM, but most especially when it says something new.
I was bothered by the idea that Lois would commit suicide. That was hard for me to buy. I'm not certain that is really in her character, as she is such a fighter.
HOWEVER, you made her despair very real and very eloquent. And I liked the idea that no two witnesses report the same thing, so why can't Barrow have missed?
Really nice.
CC
