Wow... this all is so intense... I don´t know where you´re taking us, but I hope Lois (and Clark) come out of this okay eventually...

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“Get away from her! Don’t you dare even look at her,” Clark said, focusing all his rage on the other man. In his blind unreasoning rage, his doppelganger had morphed into Kal-El in his mind. He violently shoved the other Kryptonian backwards, putting more space between him and the insensate Lois. Even this hardly registered with his doppelganger.
We all know our alt-Clark is NOT like the other Kal-El, but there are shadows of him in both Clarks, whether they want to acknowledge it or not. To be a bit philisophical here, if there is just a shade of darkness in Clark, could that ever mean that there is a shade of good in Kal-El?

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He felt cold. Were there days where making love to him was awful?
Poor Clark! How awful for those abused and their spouses. Can a couple like that ever feel whole again?

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Clark began to build up anger again, only this time he was angry at her. He super-sped over to her. It was time to take the kid gloves off.
And what will happen next? He doesn´t want to hurt her but the whole situation is driving him mad! Hope we get the next part soon!


Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way. wink