Absolutely loved their visit with Ron and Barb, and Clark's idea to see her every evening (her time) is terrific!
Just one comment on if you would want to modify the following,
Clark slid his fingers down her throat, revelling in the exquisite smoothness of her skin.
as in my sphere, this sounds like he is shoving his hand "down her throat" literally inside. But maybe that's just my own local take and not anyone else's.
Thanks for the great ride with this story!!!
