It's almost midnight, so I don't have the time to properly answer the feedback but I wanted to clear up this.

Ann said

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And you have named Lois's footy team the Hawthorns, in honour of the Hawks. Aaawwwwwww. I thought that "Hawthorns" sounded a bit sweet for a name of a macho footy team!
Hawthorn is a suburb of Melbourne. All of the Melbourne football clubs are named after suburbs.

(I think in other countries, sports teams are named after the city or the state ... here, because there were eleven teams in one city, they are named after the suburbs.)

So, the Hawthorn may be a shrub, but that's not why the club is called Hawthorn.

The information in the fic about Hawthorn is all from RL - games, results, players, home ground (even the sausages!)

And yes, I'm Female Hawk because of my passion for my club (and Lois was Female Hawk in the Smiley episode laugh .)

Thanks to everyone for the lovely FDK.

I'll get to the replies tomorrow.

Corrina.

Ann - I can't see the final pic huh but I'm now really wondering who you showed there.