Katie,
How delightful of you to make Clark intelligent enough to visit Lois as HIMSELF, rather than Superman! Well done!
One thing disappointed me: I kept expecting the story to end with a lovely little revelation along the lines of, "Let's dance.... This isn't dancing... This is."
![smile smile](/ubb/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif)
But your story was very sweet just the way it was too.
Hazel