Great job Katie.

I used to teach ballroom dancing -- and I explained that it was foreplay. You really made it that -- wonderful!!!!

Barb.

Awwww, Katie, that was so SWEET!!!

Lois' insecurities at the beginning were great. Her fears that she had lost her edge. All of the introspection was well-done.

And then the dancing, and the declarations of love, and the SMOOCHIES!!!!!!!!!!!!

So very nice, I'm glad you decided to share this with us!

Jill

Hi,

Beautiful and sweet.

Congratulation!

MAF

Nice! Ever considered following this up with a sequel....the revelation?

--meclone2--

Katie - you posted!

LabRat

Whoo Hoo! Katie's back!

Katie, this is wonderful! I absolutely love it. I can't believe you hesitated to post this. This was beautifully done. I loved the way she realized that she could trust him with her insecurities. This is my favorite time in their relationship, when they are just on the verge of friends and lovers. I've always felt like there were so many times that had things been just *slightly* different, they would have got together sooner. Fanfics are our way of exploring these scenarios, and I'm glad you explored this one!

Annie

Katie,

This story was so waffy. It was such a lovely story. I am so glad you shared it with us!!!!!

- Alicia

Awwwww That was so sweet! Laura

Katie, how could you possibly imagine that this was no good?

This was wonderful Katie, I'm so glad you decided to post it! I felt so sorry for Lois at the beginning, but when Clark appeared, and not Superman, it was perfect. /insert WAFFy sighs here

Loriel

Well I probably won't have to worry about coming out of retirement. Many more stories like this one and I'll be killed by the sweetness.

Nicely done, in that sugary, waffy, over the top everything is love and kisses sort of way.

Tank the Diabetic (who figures with a steady diet of such sweetness most of the gentle readers will be joining him before too long)

Katie,
very sweet and romantic
waffy
merry

Katie,

How delightful of you to make Clark intelligent enough to visit Lois as HIMSELF, rather than Superman! Well done!

One thing disappointed me: I kept expecting the story to end with a lovely little revelation along the lines of, "Let's dance.... This isn't dancing... This is." But your story was very sweet just the way it was too.

Hazel

Katie

WOW! This is wonderful.
Beautifully written!

I love how Lois realizes that she can trust Clark and reveals her insecurities to him.

Thanks for sharing this lovely story.
I look forward to reading your next one.

Tricia

Awwwwwwwwww..... Wowwwww

That was sweet Katie

WOW! What everyone else said (ok, except Tank )! I was reading it and saying, "WHY didn't she want to post this?!?" Really nicely done!

Oooh, Katie! I'm so glad you posted! Happy, waffy sigh.

This was so romantic and sweet. Lois's insecurities made a lot of sense, and her reactions to Clark's closeness were so very waffy! Lovely vignette!

We need more Katie-fic, you hear? So get to work

Kaethel

Awww! This is a very sweet and romantic little vignette.

I can't believe you didn't want to post this, Katie. It's beautiful!

Wow, Katie! This was beautiful!

I'm sure everybody has said this by now, but, hey, I don't think one can egt tired of hearing the same thing over and over if it's nice, so...

Just why did you say you weren't sure about posting this? Katie, this is beautiful!

I loved how you dealed with Lois and Clark's insecurities, mostly with Lois's. And the way she comes to admit her feelings for Clark... I loved your description of Lois's feelings, of all she is thinking.

And Clark's declaration of love was so... Clark.

This was great, very waffy and definitely beautiful. Thanks for sharing and thanks to the IRC nagging bunch for convincing you to post this.

Cris

PS. You don't happen to have any other vignette that you're not 100% satisfied with in your hard drive, do you?

Hi!

Thank you so much for the comments, everyone! I was totally prepared for everyone to think this wasn't very good, so I'm stunned by the response! Your lovely feedback is very much appreicated. Sadly, I don't have to time to write I detailed reply, as I would love to do. A reply to the comments is already long overdue, so I figured that posting a short message is better than nothing at all. At the moment, I have so little time as it is, but I also have the flu, so I don't have the energy to give a long reply. But once again, thank you everyone for the wonderful comments! They put a huge smile on my face.

Katie (back off to bed now to rest)