OMG!! Soooooo good!! I LOVED how you handled the reveal. I am a huge Top copy fan and i just thought this was sooo well written and thought out! LOVED IT. I like your Lois also and her reactions.
LOIS:I don't like you.
MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either.
LOIS: That makes me feel so much better
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