MORE!! A lovely start and an intriguing beginning, Squid. I love Elseworld stories and can't wait for the rest of it. My only complaint has to do with the " posting in parts" part.
I came to the end of this part salivating and want to read the rest of it *right now*.
My favorite part was the unseen admiration going in both directions. I have no doubt that Lois will be delivering the art personally. The only question is whether Clark will be able to wait until Friday to see Lois again.
