What was it with Lucy, Lois thought. How does she attract people like this?
I'm sure it's nothing to do with how Lois is a driven, cheerless, semi-paranoid androphobe.
I laughed at and felt bad for Lois all the way through this story for exactly the those same reasons. She's so driven and cheerless and determined and you wrote her so well that she seems three-dimensional.
So many questions, now, to be answered in part three. How awful is Clark going to feel when Lucy falls for his Lois-trap? Will Lois realize she was the one being set up? Will Lois discover some humanity? Will we learn what the tip was that Cat gave to Lucy?
