Wow. I don't know *what* to think!
The thing is, I never agreed with Clark freezing Lois in the first place. Luckily, in the series, everything turned out OK, but it might not have been that way - as your story shows.
So, really, who's fault is it that Lois is acting this way? She has brain damage. Brain damage inflicted on her by Clark. True, he didn't *mean* to damage her brain, and yes, he did it to save two other lives, and yes, Lois asked him to. But still....
Very sad story.
I'm not too optimistic about the ending, either.
