Artemis:
I went back and looked again and you're right. It was so obvious to me but I didn't make the action clear. It bothered me so much I just had to fix it. That passage has been modified. Thanks for pointing that out. (Really!)
I didn't have any sweets in the house, but my muse got wine and cheese. It must have worked because I got an unexpected surprise delivery last evening. I may have another short ready before too long.
c-mom:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and I wouldn't be surprised if Flo shows up as a supporting character sometime in the future.
Bob
