I beta'd this, am reading it again, and I'm enjoying it even more.
Very interesting, the conversation with Luthor - not just because he's a snake but also because it seems as if you are very aware of the contractual and legal pitfalls associated with a band trying to make the big time.
Glad to see that the near-death experience has made Lois and Clark realize that they should grasp at happiness, even if the superficial things (e.g., she's in a traveling band, he's a reporter in Metropolis) would seem to cause trouble.
Good characterization all around.
