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Thanks for reading and commenting, Terry. I point again to exhibits A and B above. Clark's actions are ill advised, in my opinion, but I hope they're understandable, given the emotion strain these two were under and his instinctive need to protect his secret.
Oh, I agree absolutely! From a dramatic standpoint, Clark is behaving consistently and rationally, and they're certainly understandable. I assure you that I was NOT criticizing your story, only this Clark's actions. And his actions are certainly in character for Clark, especially one who is so wrought up over protecting Lois.

Hope this means the final post is on its way!

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