Welcome Bren! I'm glad your plot bunny landed here.
Beautiful vignette! I'd like to think of it as an alternative scene rather than a missing one because I don't see how she can be as angry as she was in the show after all those lovely memories.
Very nicely done.
I especially liked how Superman kissed her forehead when he put her down. Her recovery from blurting out his name was inspired. And I loved his reponse at the end when she asked him to stay. Really, the whole thing is just terrific.
A logistical suggestion: if you edit your post to change the icon to the blue arrow, folks will find your story more easily. It's the convention on this board to use the blue arrow for the story and the push-pin for the feedback. So someone skimming for new stories is probably skimming for blue arrows. And yours is such a lovely little gem, I'd hate for anyone to miss it.
