Grrrr - Lana bugs! I know she hasn't got a chance, and my previous pity for her wore off when she hinted that Lois might not be going to Homecoming with Clark. The nerve!
I love how you're writing Martha, especially that you're giving her some of the same lines ("It's okay if I tell her that, isn't it?") that she had in the show (Stranger Visitor, I think).
"Sure. Show me the farm, Farmboy."
I laughed at this - she's been in Kansas for over a decade. Why not show her a farm? She's probably never seen one. It doesn't matter if it's dark. <giggles> Like the *walk* is what they're really interested in. I did sigh schmoopily at the "having a spot". It's absolutely true. And I adored their "spot". Mmm, I love hayloft stories.
