Annie, I loved this when you posted on Zoom's boards, and I'm definitely rereading it now as you repost it. I like the additions you made, the extra time you spent exploring the thoughts that both Lois and Clark had about that past weekend, how each one had wanted to call the other but felt awkward and hoped that the other would be the one to call...
And as Maria pointed out, you made the change to the conference being Monday through Wednesday, yet many of your other references refer to "a week". I assume you just missed some of the references when you made the change - an easy fix...
Kathy
