How do you manage to put so many emotions into one part?? Her frustration with him objecting to her plan, her helping him deal with tragedy, her giddy realization that she's in love, and then the humiliation of Clark seeing her being cheated upon.
All that *and* you advance the plot in several areas. You're good.
PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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