As long as you have Lois, who cares if there is any Clark or not?
Usually I don't like fics where Lois has married Lex, because I just can't see her as seeing Lex as the kind of man she'd want to 'be' with. Even if she didn't know he was the kingpin of crime, he's still doesn't live in the same world that Lois does, and I don't see her desiring that sort of life. She would have to know that she would no longer be Lois Lane, but instead, she would become Mrs. Lex Luthor.
Still, I like the redemptive aspect that you have built your story around. Lois has made a bad mistake, but now she is hellbent to correct that situation. While many would be satisfied with just getting a divorce to get out from under Lex; but not Lois. She has to make things 'right'. She has to bring Lex down also.
I will be fun to see Lois hook up with Clark. I wonder how much he'll know of her pre-Lex life as a reporter for the Daily Planet.
Tank (who points out that a good disguise for Lois should include a good haircut)
