Wow! There was so much story there that I don't know where to begin.
Your story moves quickly, without feeling as if anything is glossed over. You do a good job of introducing all of the characters, although there were so many children that I tended to forget who was who. JJ and Arielle I always got straight. Other than that they got mixed up in my head. (Of course, I'm not the brightest grape in the bunch.)
It is interesting to see how the kids are collectively able to explore their limitations and abilities easier in the group than Clark did on his own. I think this is particularly true with the telepathic talents. Clark didn't exactly have anyone to talk to, so he wouldn't have explored his limitations.
Elisabeth
