Well, we're moving right along, here smile

My personal favorite line was the last one, about yodeling <g> Great scene-ender!

Good interaction between the two of them -- or rather, inside each of them, since they don't really talk to each other... but you've got all sorts of nuances going here.

Can't wait to see the next part smile

PJ

"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

--Stardust, Caroline K