Sara,
This story is so much fun! I just read parts 3 and 4 and am totally delighted.
I am amazed that even with all the internal dialogues going on, Clark and his twin still manage to hold normal conversations at the same time! LOL Guess it took years of practice. <g>
I like the idea of Jay being married to Rachel. Now did all three move to Metropolis at the same time? And I assume that only Clark did the world traveler tour while Jay finished his studies/research?
The Lois and Clark interaction is great. They work so well together when Lois isn't as bossy.
Looking forward to Friday,
Natascha
