Wow, very well done.
Have to be honest here. I almost stopped reading Lucy's story. It had some dry-ish spots about 3 chapters ago and I thought why bother continueing since it seemed to be a rehash, but I am glad I stuck it out.
Just a suggestion following. Ignore if you feel like it.
LtL-Lucy's story would be wonderful it it was blended together with LtL so that the reader gets little rests during the intense storyline of Ltl.
Just a suggestion.
James
