I just had the chance to catch up - wonderful story. thumbsup

I loved how you analyzed Lois's thoughts as she put two and two together - as others have said, the use of pictures was brilliant.

Looking forward to Part 3!

Elle Roberts

She's a dancer who doesn't dance. He's a painter who doesn't paint. It's like a bohemian version of the Island of Misfit Toys. – “Igby Goes Down”