Wow. That revelation was really, really powerful.
Like Labby and Pam, I personally don't enjoy pictures in a fic post, although my reasons might be different.
To me, pictures don't belong in a text story; I prefer the pictures painted by the words, rather than an arbitrary image forced upon me by a photo. But that's just me.
This time, though, the imagery was superb. Superman's lips - Clark's lips. Superman's kiss - Clark's kiss. Wow. It was like watching a ping-pong match of the synapses in Lois' brain.
One of the best revelations I've ever read, and if we have still have a best revelation scene Kerth award next year, this would go on my noms list. Beautifully done!
Hazel
