I really enjoyed this story. My mind jumped through a couple of scenarios when I read the first line, but they were nothing like this. Brilliant.
I particularly liked how Jimmy silently observed Clark and Lois. Maybe Clark's inability to work both jobs and build a relationship with Lois was the reason Jimmy didn't reveal himself earlier.
Heh. Wendy's first line "What do you mean, we're fraternal twins?" would work great for a sequel.
Thanks for posting.
