Wow Jenni...

This part took an interesting tangent to focus more on the bomber and Matt.

It was interesting to see the bitterness, hate and malice of the monster behind the bombs..

It was also intriguing to see Matt confront such a violent event with a little push from his dad. As others mentioned, you conveyed the child that he is, and yet also showed the hero that he will (already has) become.

I also liked the subtle hint about Clarks speed... it gives hope... even if Clark doesn't realise it himself.

As always... loving this story.

I actullay just finished 'The Forgotten' yesterday so I had the back story.. and wow... that was another amazing story.. it brought into focus for me a lot of what you are conveying in this story...

Please keep writing!


"He's my best friend, best of all best friends
Do you have a best friend too
It tickles in my tummy
He's so Yummy Yummy
Hey you should get a best friend too" - Toy Box