Oh God! My only question is... when are you going to post the next part and is this also going to turn into a trilogy or more?
With Kent out of the picture, Deter's pretty much free to do whatever he wants, and there's no more Vibro Whammy to lurch Lane out of the sick post-hypnotic suggestions.
Will it be Perry and Jimmy to the rescue this time? But even if it is that's not going to stop what would happen the night where you left us hanging, or will it? Maybe Kent has those gut feelings and he goes flying straight through those glass walls of Deter's lair. Maybe Lane *is* strong enough to override hypnoism as she claimed in "Illusions of Grandeur." Although she wasn't very successful then either.
Or wait.. I have a horrible thought... the sad sad song in Lane's Regina residence, is that for Deter or Kent? Maybe Lane moves in with Deter, and Kent moves out of this world with Zara and Ching for a number of years (We are in 1995/1996 and we have till 2001)... And when something happens to Deter, she moves to Regina, revamps her lifestyle, punches bags, etc etc... no no can't be... too many loopholes in this scenario.. Besides you can't be so evil... can you?
Wait, this isn't the week where you're going on a 2-week vacation, are you? :p
