I keep telling myself not to read, to just wait until the story is all posted because I can't deal with the ML's evil cliffhangers anymore. But ... I just can't resist.
The chapter was well done and an interesting change from the original. Loved that you kept *the kiss* the same and I can't say I'm sorry that Dan (and probably Mayson) seem to be on their way out. Whether Mayson is immediately dead or not will definitely affect Clark. Now, in both timelines Clark has to deal with the guilt of snogging Lois while Mayson is in trouble.
Sigh... Still I didn't mind a "Just Say Noah" trilogy. In fact, go ahead and make "Don't Tug on Superman's Cape" a 4-parter. It'll give them both time to talk and -- anything to delay the ARGH is a good enough reason to stall. Of course, with no Superman, will the Lakes even make an appearance?
More soon, please
Brenda
