Great part ML.

Loved the Mayson & Clark stuff. He is so... uncomfortable with her. They are the perfect mismatch. *happy sigh* And no sex for months of dating. Yes, Mayson is exactly what Clark doesn't need laugh

And Dan & Lois. Man, can you say brother and sister? And the sex-stuff was just rotflol .

You were right about calling the mob to extend Mayson's and Dan's contracts. On the other hand, it's just Mayson's third appearance and Dan's first. So they might still only get 4 episodes each laugh

On to the fun stuff. I checked, and I'm happy I already noted the "best friend" thingy in part 26. And now Lois thinks she *loves* him. That and the proposal-dream suggest some big wacky mumbo-jumbo with the timeline.

As for what's not stated, I still know that Clark and Lois got caught soft of in 92 when they showed up in Starlabs. And Lois got arrested. And Mother started to drink because her daughter is an evil criminal.

And I hope you don't mind, ML, but since you did post this in the FDK for part one:
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And what do you mean by monstrosity? About 400k or about 800k?
Longer. Umm... let's put it this way: were I to post one part every day, it would still take me more than six weeks to post the entire story.
My money is on 54 parts smile

Michael


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