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I'm sure if nobody is fazed by ML's attempts at cliffhangers anymore then she will stop trying to make cliffhangers and just provide wonderful parts that can be enjoyed without the intense feelings of suspense and withdrawal at the end. Suspense in the middle is just fine. And withdrawal is natural no matter where you stop. Yep, everything is just fi-ine.
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I've lost count of how many times I thught "aww" whilst reading this part
Glad you enjoyed it.

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The ending was just plain yucky though, no matter what anybody else says.
Don't worry. It gets worse wave


She was in such a good mood she let all the pedestrians in the crosswalk get to safety before taking off again.
- CC Aiken, The Late Great Lois Lane