I've been out of town for almost two weeks, so I've spent the last couple of days catching up on this story. I still love this story, Carol! I like that Lois and Clark are growing closer together, that Lois is starting to trust, and that Clark is starting to be able to be a little more open. That last section with the impatient Jimmy and Lois and Clark in bed was adoreable!
I'm sorry you chose to cut down the size of the story from here.
Although I can completely understand why you'd make a decision not to go into so much detail (even if your reasons are not the reasons I would have - I could still understand), I'm sure I would have loved to read it if you'd chosen to take a longer route. I can't believe there are only about ten more parts left! I can see the progress that is being made with the characters, but now I don't want to let go of them.
