Ahh gaaah. I liked this part, I liked the interaction between Lois and Clark, and I liked Chris, but somehow there was such an ominous feeling to the entire last section that you had me on pins and needles much of the time, waiting for the explosion. And sure enough, it came!
Welcome back with more soon, but I've got to tell you, this nerve-wracking stuff isn't very good for my blood pressure!
Ann
