Wonderful.
Being buried alive was worse than Cho could have imagined....His face tight, Colonel Kwan ignored the crowds milling aimlessly in the streets...The one thing he knew was that as long as his father was there, everything was going to be all right. His father could do anything. He was the closest person to being Superman Cho had ever known.
Current hallucinations notwithstanding.
It has been said before but again your "spear carriers" have depth and feeling. Delightful! They really help to round your tales out and give us the mood, to make even Superman feel real.
This man...spoke Mandarin with a strong Shanghai accent. He’d probably learned to speak Wu first
Those little details, wonderful.
“I need your help....I can’t do this without you,” the man said.
Having Clark asking for help, really shows us just who this man is!
There was no need to go into the fact that his name actually matched that of the comic book character. That was a coincidence that would stretch people’s sense of credulity.
Good, Clark will be able to have a secret identity when he gets home.
