I considered doing an nfic version, Michael. In fact, in the original version of this story, I had notes to myself all through it that said: "If I do an nfic version, add more here."

But in the end, I decided it wasn't necessary. I figured there was enough steam in this story without taking it to the next level. And it really wouldn't have added anything to the story line.

Anyway, I'm off now to post the next part.

ML wave

She was in such a good mood she let all the pedestrians in the crosswalk get to safety before taking off again.
- CC Aiken, The Late Great Lois Lane