Originally posted by MLT:
BTW, you should have an award for triggering 2 alarms on that dang parental monitoring software I didn't mean to install. That's a record so far.
) Good. So it's not just my imagination that this part had more sexual energy than some of the more explicit stuff I've seen on the dark side. I don't think you've stepped over the line, at least as far as explicit stuff goes. But then, you should see what I've cut from my PG-13 version / reworded stuff so it's all nice and tame and happy and not over the line (/me is a terrible PG-13 judge).
Anyway, please
if you are really concerned about steamier parts. There is always the option of posting special versions of the parts with more *interesting* scenes. (You know what I'm talking about
)
And if you just post the way you did #10, well, that's very fine too, for it is something to behold, study and learn from in the way of writing fics
Big BUT though: What do you mean by "Lois and Clark
or Lane and Kent" Shouldn't that be an
and in there. And what happens if at some point we see Lane and Clark? I do fully expect you to lower yourself to this evilness, ML.
Michael
