you really don't think I'm ever going to give up on that do you?
Well, a girl can dream, can't she?
Actually, considering the amount of editing I'm doing before posting each section, you really don't want the unedited version (trust me
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I'm not so in love with the angst of Lois and Clark losing their child, though. That's really, really mean.
Trust me. (Hey, isn't that what the spider said when he invited the fly into his web)
I saw this story and said that I was going to wait until it was posted on the archives but alas I couldn't resist the lure of an ML story so here I am.
Well, what people don't know is that I put this hypnotic suggestion into the subject line saying 'you must read this part; you must read this part; you must read this part.'
In my opinion, Lois didn't treat his grief with as much respect as it deserved. She told him that everything was okay, but in reality it isn't. They've both lost a lot...
Good point, Elizabeth. I'll go back and do a small rewrite.
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