I'm really impressed with the story. I know translating can be rough. It's much easier to come up with an entirely new story, so that you can express ideas limited to the language you already know.
I'm glad that the doctors aren't arguing among themselves. It would be a lot more difficult if one thought he exhibited symptoms of radiation poisoning and another said that he didn't.
It was touching to see that Sam cared about Lois, even though he's not been the ideal father for her.
Elisabeth
