Carol, I'm glad you took the plunge. I liked the way you handled that first scene. By leaving it vague like that, it would have worked at a lot of places near ski resorts. I, of course, kept picturing the north side of Red Mountain Pass. Poor Clark. I'm not sure he would be able to think of all the things that would happen, but it made me very sad for him.
And poor Lois! Her mom just forgetting that she was walking a mile through the rain.
I really liked the part with L&C at the journalism camp. Their behavior and attitudes seemed very real to me for a 12 and 14 year old. Now my brain is leaping ahead, assuming that something will happen that prevents Clark from writing. I guess I'll try to wait patiently until next weekend for part 2.
