I really enjoyed this installment. It was nice to see a Lois and Lucy that get along so well. It's very different from canon and the sisterly banter was really fun - especially this...
Imagine that man in nothing but black silk boxers
/me slurps. Yeah, definitely imagining it over here.
I'm feeling so bad for Clark. In the best of circumstances, he's led a lonely life, always fearful of his differences. Here, there's something tragic in his relationship with his dad. I figure that Jonathan's "episodes" somehow led Clark to his investigation of the chemical company - I hope he will be ok.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
BJ
P.S., you might want to change the icon for your posts to the little blue arrow. It makes it so much easier to see a new story post.