Yay! I'm the first person to give FDK on this great story!
I just wanted to say that I love where you're taking this. I really like the pacing so far. I don't feel like I'm hanging around waiting for things to happen, yet at the same time you've given lots of good character moments.
But I can't wait for Clark to meet Lois! Will he even like her at first, or will she just come off as a person looking for a story? And how will Clark adjust to living in a normal life? So far he hasn't been given a lot of freedom at Luthor's, but when he does leave (whenever that happens) it will be a huge adjustment for him.
I also liked the part with Martha. She suspects something, that's for sure. I'm hoping to see more of her and Jonathan in the future.
Anyway, I love this story so far. You've got me very interested.
