Awww! Poor Clark!
I'm really enjoying this story. You're doing such a good job of it! (heck, I dislike Mayson something serious, but I think you did a wonderful job with her in this part! well done!!)
I like how you explained that it's because people only really see Superman's powers that the dual identity really worked - that makes so much sense. And how you described what it is for him to be human and what he's lost now that people know he's Superman.
I'm really looking forward to the next part!
