I am considering expanding the whole thing so I can include Henderson's POV and more of HoL and ME.
The whole ignore the police investigation thing in Madame Ex bothered me to no end. A famous surgeon is murdered and dumped in an alley - the cops would be beating the bushes for witnesses, going through his files, interviewing his patients, his employees. Lois & Clark should be stumbling into police all over the place.
But I'm glad everybody's liked this short version.
And yes, the long one will include Lois's reaction.
