Thanks for the feedback! As for the nfic Ann didn't dare to make me write, Nancy has already asked me for nfic when she read the first kiss of this fic. Not that it is actually worth anything
Eh, anyway, I guess I will write a nfic part as soon as it fits into the story. Right now I don't get much done, 'cause real life is rather rough with me these days and it won't get any better in the next two weeks. While I have at least six more parts written, I need to rework a major section and I don't really see that I'll manage to do this this weekend.
Trying to be back as soon as possible.