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That Arthur Dent!!! rotflol Don't you think that poor chap had something to do with the fact that the Messenger exploded before Clark could save it?
If he did, it'll be the last time he hitches a ride.

Excellent vignette, Sammy. I think you've captured Lois's shell of cynicism around a vulnerable heart, along with Clark's way with words as an avenue to her heart. I liked it a lot. And don't stop writing them, you hear?

Say, I've an idea! Why don't you write the very same scene from Clark's POV? I'll bet you'd have some excellent insight on his thoughts, too. I know I'd read it.


Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.

- Stephen King, from On Writing