Just when you think that there can't be a fresh rewrite of TOGoM, someone comes along and proves you wrong.

Good beginning. It's great to see Lois letting it all out. I think we've all come to believe (mostly through all the TOGoM rewrites) that Lois was much more devastated by Clark's supposed death than the show allowed her to be.

Looking forward to more.

Tank the Retired (who wonders if there'll ever be an end to TOGoM rewrites... Nah!)