I agree. Great beginning!

Let's see, the dead man is Bill Church? Superman was last seen carrying him away, and no one knows his true nature so Superman has been accused of kidnapping a civic and business leader and maybe killing him? And Superman has been incapacitated by Kryptonite poisoning, so he didn't quite know what he was doing?

I'm probably way off here, but I don't care. I'm ready for the next part.


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