Ooh yippee!

I love good Clark's sick/injured/lost his memory/etc yarn. Keep it coming.

Interesting premise--looking forward to learning more!

Wow, Barbara, that's a totally fascinating premise!

Superman has been declared a threat to all of humanity by the United Nations????

Clark is hurt and lost and amnesiac to the point that he doesn't know his own name, or where he lives, or what country he's in, or who his parents are, or what he does for a living, or what he did ten minutes ago?

And Lois has finally worked up the courage to tell Clark that she loves him, but she is still sorry that she'll have to give up Superman for Clark, so it would solve so many of her problems if Clark was Superman, but of course he isn't (Lois!!!! :rolleyes: ), and now she needs to find Clark to tell him that she loves him and to ask him help her defend Superman, but she can't find him, until the very end, when she suddenly finds him! (Yay!!!!)

And the dead man is making Clark even sicker when he touches him - as if his blood is full of Kryptonite or something!

Wow, what a premise! This is going to be a fascinating story, Barbara!

Ann

Thanks so much guys!

I'm so relieved you liked this part, Ann. I almost thought you wouldn't. Because Lois...well. Hehe, you picked up most of my hints, but you did completely misunderstand one of them.

You did it. You know I love your story. Great start.

I agree. Great beginning!

Let's see, the dead man is Bill Church? Superman was last seen carrying him away, and no one knows his true nature so Superman has been accused of kidnapping a civic and business leader and maybe killing him? And Superman has been incapacitated by Kryptonite poisoning, so he didn't quite know what he was doing?

I'm probably way off here, but I don't care. I'm ready for the next part.

Thanks, Terry and Tahu!

You're right, Terry, that's pretty far from the truth, but nice guess.

Great start of your story.

Sounds interesting
/me is waiting for more

What did I miss, Barbara? Was it this?

Lois is thinking to herself that there is a possibility that the accusations against Superman might be justified. And if they are, then
Huh? But how can she be thinking that? What has she done to anger Superman? And what has she done to lead him down the wrong path?

Superman wasn't like that and thus Clark was perfectly fine? Are you suggesting, Barbara, that Superman has been accused of doing something awful to Clark Kent? Is Lois thinking that just maybe, maybe he actually has done something horrible to Clark, maybe even murdered him? And is she thinking that if Superman really has killed Clark, then that would be her fault? But how could it be?

Hmmmm. This is most certainly intriguing, Barbara!

Ann

Fascinating premise. So dark and foreboding in a compelling kind of way.

Elisabeth

Thanks, Elisabeth and Babsi!

Wrong quote, Ann. But do you really think I would tell you now and spoil the rest of the story?

I'm going to post the new part depending on how quickly my betas will send the parts back to me. I'd like to post in a kind of regular schedule. There are more parts ready, but I'm afraid you'll have to wait a little for part 2

*clears throat*

I think the clue is in the title.


*runs back to her own story*

Hmm, I'm a little late to the party. I hope it's not too late.

Anyway, the beginning is definitely intriguing, and I'm so glad that I can just go ahead and read the second part straight away.

/me walks off to part 2