Hmm... An intriguing start. I have to say, I picked up on the hair thing too and that made me giggle. I don't think you've written any new stories (until this one) since I've been on the board, but I've heard about your...fondness for giving Lois haircuts.
Looks like this is shaping up to be a good story. I'll be keeping an eye out for Part 2 etc.
~Anna.
